Eng. 150
Unit Test 2: Part B (Identifying Run-ons and Comma Splices)


Read the following section in your Bedford Handbook before you start the exercises:

Section 20.  Yes, all of it!  

Also, make sure to try out some of the practice problems online with the Hacker website  (Dave’s email is david-holper@redwood.edu for the login).  Then go to Grammatical Sentences and do the exercises under Run-on Sentences.  

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Practice Problems: Find and repair the following run-ons and comma splices using the above methods.  If the sentence is correct, label it that, and leave it alone.

 

1)    Though you may not have heard of me, I am just a poor boy in a poor county my story is seldom told.

 

2)    In all the rush of the 1980s, we loved to party hardy late into the crazy night, however, we suffered for it the next day when we had to take tests.

 

3)    I grew up in Marin County when it was just a podunk suburb of San Francisco commuter families lived there.

 

4)    Eureka is a nice town to grow up in, yet many people move away because they want to see the larger world.

 

5)    George Bush is our president and commander in chief, he is now seeking another tax cut for all Americans, particularly the wealthy ones.

 

6)    Grades are not a measure of your worth, they do not measure whether you are good, bad, or indifferent.

 

7)    As America enters this new century, we struggle with issues of race and religion, moreover, we face questions that would have baffled our forefathers and foremothers.

 

1)    Making a lot of money is not necessarily the solution to life's problems, money cannot make a child feel loved, it cannot guarantee a sense of purpose, and it doesn't provide forgiveness.

 

2)    One doesn't often ask what is funny that seems obvious because we laugh.

 

10) If enough people want to see the government change, then they can indeed change it corporations are relatively powerless to vote they only have money to influence votes.