Eng. 1A

Holper

TIMELY TIPS FOR TIMED ESSAYS

1) I think that Wendell Berry makes a good point in his essay.  (Also: In my opinion, in my personal opinion, I feel, I believe.)

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2) In Wendell Berry's essay Home of the Free, he makes many points that I find true.  (or italics, or underlined and quoted)

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3) Wendell makes many valid points.

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4) (Topic sentence to body paragraph) "We somehow have the right to be set free from anything whatsoever we hate," Berry writes.

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5) Berry says that we are lazy.

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6) Berry wrote about two different advertisements.

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7) Berry writes that he " ... made [his] back tired and [his] hands sore..."

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8) Mr. Berry makes many strong points.

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9) This isn’t true, you won’t get to experience nature…

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10) Could this be satisfying to anyone in their right mind, I ask myself.

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11) Technically, the majority of jobs today are machine driven; such as, plowing a field or cutting down trees.

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12) Then at 15, the soccer team finally made it. 

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13) I agree with Wendell Berry because completing one’s own tasks and providing for yourself is very satisfying.

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14) Another thought touched on by Berry…

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15) This crazy lazy world…

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16) Nicole has grown up in home where everything is done for her.  From laundry to packing a lunch.

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17) Well, I believe we need to experience… (or) Anyway, back to what I was saying…

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18) Definitely, noone, seperetly, litering, dependant, thier, aquiring, capsel, collage, writer, satifaction, now days,

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19) “I concluded that there would be a lot of what passes for “efficiency,” a lot of “production” and “consumption.””

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20) It seems a simple enough question, however perhaps it is not the correct question.

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21) Berry believes people should get satisfaction from the natural things in life. Going out there and getting your hands dirty, getting hurt and learning from your experience.

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