Illogical Wording and Parallelism

Directions: Rewrite each of the following sentences to eliminate errors.  You may add/delete words, but you must preserve the intended meaning of the sentence.

1. Morrow then narrows his audience’s focus by identifying the enemy bin Laden and those who conspire with them the reader can direct his fury.

2. It leaves the reader questionable on his or her own morals and judgments.

3. Lasers only destroy the target, leaving the surrounding healthy tissue intact.

4. His claim on disagreeing with the way the school system works and the effect it has on the immigrant families is poorly stated.

5. The law was passed for cases like people who where terminally ill and excruciating pain.